Edits to the story

As we started editing our work we had realised that the bedroom scene took up a fair amount of time even after we had cut and edited the sequence, therefore when we filmed the rest of our film we cut out the part when 'Red' encounters the 'jogger' due to simply not having enough time to have that part in the film.

Although, not having this part in doesn't reveal too much of the story in the first opening sequence which could potentially be better because if we did include that part we would of witnessed her murder a man in the first two minutes which may have revealed too much of the story too early on. Not knowing much about her purpose and character in the first two minutes of the film adds to her mysteriousness and could perhaps make more people want to see the rest of the film to see what she is out to do rather than seeing it straight away.