Developing 'Red Riding Hood' idea

Guys I was thinking that when we have shown the news report maybe she could turn it off then the music should start and fade in then we could do a shot of her pulling a stocking up her leg then a close up of her eyes and putting mascara on then an extreme close up of her putting red lipstick on then we could do a shot of the back of her putting the hood up then her walking out then a close up of her walking in the red heels and then everything else we said, what do you think?